I guess it’s a good thing that we’re shaking the bugs out of this story by publishing it online before it goes to actual print. Chapter 49: Man On The Floor! is a case in point.
I thought this chapter was pretty well done, although I also didn’t think it held up to the standard raised in the past few chapters. But after I sent a preview of the chapter to one of the principals, I started getting not only feedback, but all kinds of new revelations that shed light on subjects that have been buried for forty years.
To discuss this chapter, please visit the forums.
Beyond that, I’ll let the chapter stand for itself, except to say "ho hum, just another day in the rabbit hole."
And to wish you all a Merry Merry and a Happy Happy. That will probably be it (for new chapters, anyway) for 2006.